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                     "just walk into the light          "shut your mouth and close your eyes
            or keep heading for the black          for darkness you have a knack
               if you're looking for delight"          you're the devil in disguise"
              said the trickster in my back          said the trickster in my back
         "choose the realm where to go:          "choose the realm where to go:
       three headed demons that attack          three headed demons that attack
          or pale angels that think slow?"          or pale angels that think slow?"
              said the trickster in my back          said the trickster in my back
 "shut your mouth and close your eyes         "just walk into the light
          for darkness you have a knack          or keep heading for the black
               you're the devil in disguise"          if you're looking for delight"
              said the trickster in my back          said the trickster in my back
                                hell                                             heaven
                                hell                                            heaven
                                hell                                            heaven
                      "just walk into the light          "the shading on your heart is thin
             or keep heading for the black          i'll give you all that you lack
                if you're looking for delight"          now the rotting can begin"
              said the trickster in my back           said the trickster in my back
This is an experiment of mine containing a little bit of subliminal mesages and the underlining of an idea. I also fiddled with the placement of the stanzas. It is about death and the deciding of one's fate post mortem.

The preview is an eye copy by me of a screen in PC game "American McGee's Alice" (the trickster in my opinion).
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fukface Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2005
This is fucking awesome!!

With your permission Id like to make part or most of this into a electro track. Let me know asap!!!!!
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negullah Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2005
Oh, dude, I'm really flattered here... :)

No problem, you can freely use it in the electro track you want. I just want that you give me a little bit of credit and send me the song (wish you luck, hope it sounds good) Have fun! :yes:

P.S. : Thanks for the favorite! :hug:
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MsStriker Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2004
i'm not so good in poetry because i'm german but i try ;)

i think is very nice. so ok i like the way you accord with heaven and hell and use the first stanza stanza sentence from hell in heaven too but in another order i think this give this piece many deep. but i think the last stanza is the best there i think you exchange the words for hell with the from the heaven. and when i have that interpreted than i think i must go through the hell to come in the heaven. keep it up ;)
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negullah Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2004
Oh, being german doesn't mean that you're not good with poetry! ;) Thank you for the nice comment!:)
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MsStriker Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2004
i mean with that. that I'm not so good in english like other. so i can't understand some meanings
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Miserie Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2004  Professional Digital Artist
this straight up rocks. I love two sided poems, but this is a new way of displaying them. I would say things are repetitive, but it works for this piece. :) I'm adding this to my favorites. Lovely work on the mad hatter-ness as well. You're very talented by the look of things...can't wait to look at the other poem you sent me to see.
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negullah Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2004
Thanks! :hug:
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silverwand13 Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2004
I've never been one for poetry so I'm not sure how valid my reponse is. :shrug: But to me it was interesting, thought provoking even. I really did enjoy it. :)
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negullah Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2004
Ooo,h thought provoking... I like that! Thanks! :glomp:
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sanja Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2004
great colouring and style :)
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